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Posts: 936 Joined: 3 Mar 2004 | up |
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 Posts: 142 Joined: 25 Feb 2005 | Sounds good so far. Can't wait to read more. |
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 Posts: 3216 Joined: 17 Dec 2003 | Did you write this Syndian? |
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 Posts: 2780 Joined: 25 Sep 2004 | sounds good so far |
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Posts: 74 Joined: 1 Aug 2005 | Nope, Will (The other person who uses this account in Lineage) he wrote it. Coby-chan [Edited by Edo Tenjoru at 4:21 AM on 8/21/2005] |
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Posts: 3216 Joined: 17 Dec 2003 | Yeah, sounds great. Keep them coming. |
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 Posts: 836 Joined: 20 Jun 2005 | It has potential and the writing is good, be careful however not to put to much detail into it, when that happens it gains a feeling of drawn out. Paint a vague picture with just enough detail that areas and characters are unique and distinguishable in the imagination. |
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We welcome discussion regarding our newest column here.
Fixed hopefully.
[Edited by Sydian at 10:53 PM on 8/18/2005]